i learned about store and hospital today
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i learned about store and hospital today and i can see picture persones choosing a book and me to want choos a book and i don't like hospital it is beacause hospital habe injact and today's activity was very fun Thank you teacher!
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Hi there Benjamin! Happy Monday to you again! How are you now? Thank you for this composition. Here are my corrections to your sentences. Have fun checking them out! Bye Bye!
T. Summer
i learned about store and hospital today
>> I learned about the store and the hospital today.
and i can see picture persones choosing a book and me to want choos a book
>> I saw a picture of people choosing books and it made me want to choose a book too.
and i don\'t like hospital it is beacause hospital habe injact
>> I don\'t like the hospital because of injections.
and today\'s activity was very fun
>> Today\'s activity was very fun.
Thank you teacher!
>> Correct
>> Thank you so much teacher!
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