i learned about urban area
학생이 쓴 원문
Today i learned about urban area and urban area have pollution but i like urban area it is beacause maybe i can meet many time in weekend and i can go amusment [이름] and many place and Today's activity was very fun, Thank you teacher good bye!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I enjoyed talking with you!
You made my 25-minutes worthwhile. ^.^
Continue sharing your thoughts in our discussion.
Have a blast my dear! See you on Friday!
~Teacher Rain~
urban area have pollution but i like urban area it is beacause maybe i can meet many time in weekend and i can go amusment [이름] and many place
>> Urban areas are polluted. I like to live in an urban area, because I want to spend my weekend going to an amusement [이름] and other place.
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