i learned about weather today

2016-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Summer

학생이 쓴 원문

i learned about weather today and i like weather sunny day and Today's activity was very good and Today's activity was very fun Thank you teacher

강사 첨삭

Hi there Benjamin! Thank you for this again. Don\'t forget about the shapes we learned today.^^ Here are my corrections to your sentences. Thanks a lot! Bye! Bye! T. Summer^^ i learned about weather today >>I learned about the weather today. and i like weather sunny day and >> I like sunny weather. Today\'s activity was very good >> Today\'s activity was very good. >> I had a good time today. and Today\'s activity was very fun >> Today\'s activity was very fun. >> I had fun with today\'s activity Thank you teacher >> Thank you teacher. >> Thanks a lot teacher.  

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