i learned about winter

2016-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Summer

학생이 쓴 원문

i learned about winter winter have snow and i like play with snow it is beacause snow is fun and pretty and Today's activity was very fun Thank you teacher!! Good bye!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Benjamin! Thank you again for this. Here are my corrections to your sentences. See you in class! Bye! Bye! T. Summer^^ i learned about winter >> I learned about winter. winter have snow >> We have snow on winter. and i like play with snow it is beacause snow is fun and pretty and >> I like playing with snow because it is pretty and it is fun. Today\'s activity was very fun >> Today\'s activity was very fun. >> I had fun with today\'s activity. Thank you teacher!! >> Correct >> Thanks a lot teacher! Good bye!!! >> Correct >>Bye! Bye!

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