i learned about [이름]
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i learned about [이름] and i can see insect,trees,glass,kite and peple and i like [이름] it is beacause [이름] is very big and agreeable but i don't like high it is beacause i have fear of heights but my yonger brother don't have fear of heights but he don't like insect and my yongest brother like insect Today's activity was very fun. Thank you so much teacher
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i learned about [이름]
>> I learned about the [이름] today.
and i can see insect,trees,glass,kite and peple and
>> I can see insects, trees, grass, kite and people in the [이름].
i like [이름] it is beacause [이름] is very big and agreeable but i don\'t like high it is beacause i have fear of heights
>> I like the [이름] because it is very big and agreeable but I don\'t like high places because I have fear of heights.
but my yonger brother don\'t have fear of heights but he don\'t like insect
>> My younger brother doesn\'t have fear of heights but he doesn\'t like insects.
and my yongest brother like insect
>> My youngest brother likes insects.
Today\'s activity was very fun.
>> I enjoyed today\'s topic.
Thank you so much teacher
>> Correct
>> Many thanks, teacher.
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