i learned new word aerobic dance

2017-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

i learned new word in our class and wich that word is aerobic aerobic dance is very hard and difficult but is fun i play badminton at week and badminton is fun but little difficult Today's activity was very fun and good Thank you teacher see you at friday.

강사 첨삭

HELLO BENJAMIN,

I am happy that you have learned something today.

I hope that you will make use all the words that you have learned today.

Have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

i learned new word in our class and wich that word is aerobic

>> I learned a new word which is aerobic in our class today.
aerobic dance is very hard and difficult but is fun

>> Aerobic dance is a very difficult sports but it is fun.
i play badminton at week and badminton is fun but little difficult

>> I play badminton every week. Playing badminton is fun but a bit difficult.
Today\'s activity was very fun and good Thank you teacher see you at friday.

>> Today\'s activity is very good and I had fun. Thank you teacher and see you on Friday.

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