i learned the about toy car today

2017-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Summer

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i learned the about toy car today i don't have toy car beacause my brothers broken my toy cars and Today's activity was very fun Thank you so much teacher

강사 첨삭

Hey there Ben! I\'m glad to know that you enjoyed today\'s activity. Thank you for this.^^ Bye! Bye!

T.Summer^^

i learned the about toy car today

>> I learned about a toy car today.

 i don\'t have toy car beacause my brothers broken my toy cars

>> I don\'t have a toy car because my younger brothers broke it.

 and Today\'s activity was very fun

>> I had fun today.

 Thank you so much teacher

>> Correct

>> Thanks a lot teacher.


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