i learned the book store today
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned the book store today i buy a book at the book store and i kill time play smart phone and read a book and Thank you teacher good bye!
강사 첨삭
Hello Benjamin! ^^
Thank you for writing a composition on what you have learned today.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
i learned the book store today i buy a book at the book store and i kill time play smart phone and read a book and Thank you teacher good bye!
>> Today I learned about bookstores. I learned that I can buy books at a bookstore and I learned about the expression \"to kill time\". I can say that I kill time by playing on my smartphone and by reading a book. Thank you teacher! Good bye.
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