i learned the christmas Today
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned the christmas Today and christmas is god birthday beacause maybe my family is eat cake and celebrate god birthday and Today's activity was very fun, Thank you teacher and i like ham either good bye!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank God your computer was already working and we were able to talk without any problems.
Thank you for your great participation about our lesson! ^.^ Keep it up!
Anyway, have a spectacular Wednesday ahead and see you on Friday!
~Teacher Rain~
i learned the christmas Today and christmas is god birthday beacause maybe my family is eat cake and celebrate god birthday
>> I learned about Christmas today. Christmas is Jesus\'s birthday. My family eat cake and celebrate this day.
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