i learned the pocket money Today.
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned the pocket money Today. i need a pocket money because i buy some snacks and buy school supplies for and Today's activity was fun Thank you teacher!
강사 첨삭
Hello Benjamin!
I had fun in our class today too. ^^
Good job in writing about what you learned today.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
i learned the pocket money Today. i need a pocket money because i buy some snacks and buy school supplies for and Today\'s activity was fun Thank you teacher!
>> I learned about pocket money today. I learned that I need pocket money to buy some snacks and school supplies. Today\'s activity was so thank you, teacher!
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