i learned word non-leaving Things

2016-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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i learned word non-leaving Things non-leaving Thing is like rock,iron,book and computers and non leaving Thing is dozent have move and don't have any life and Today's activity was very fun,Thank you teacher!!!

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Hi Benjamin!   It was nice meeting you! Thank you for this composition. Just be careful about punctuations. I appreciate this a lot. I had fun in our class as well because you were very participative. See you on Wednesday! ^_^   _ Teacher Dianne   i learned word non-leaving Things >> I have learned about non-living things. (Capitalize \"I\") non-leaving Thing is like rock,iron,book and computers and non leaving Thing is dozent have move and don\'t have any life and >> The examples of non-living things are rocks, irons, books, and computers. Non living things don\'t move and they don\'t have a life. Today\'s activity was very fun, >> Today\'s activity was very fun! >> Or: Today\'s activity was very fun. Thank you teacher!!! >> Correct

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