I left my previous company because I wasn\'t learning or growing anymore.
학생이 쓴 원문
My key focus areas are growth and lessons. If I don\'t have the opportunity to grow and learn, I leave the space. I don\'t have patience with the circumstance. In my previous company, when I felt I wasn\'t learning or growing anymore, I decided to move on to a new company and a new industry. So I thought there was an opportunity in the AI industry. At that time, I worked at home during the COVID-19 pandemic. So I wrote a resume and had interviews. After three or four months, I started work at an AI company where I am working currently.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
First of all, congratulations for perfectly composing all these sentences in your paragraph! If you used AI, that is okay. AI should make our lives easier and better. ^^
Seriously, these sentences have very good ideas and grammar patterns. They also contain appropriate vocabulary words to express exactly what you mean. I am always excited to read your answers.
It is true, when growth is limited, it becomes boring and not challenging to work. Thus, I hope that your current company provides you with great opportunities to be excellently skillful as a professional.
You have done a wonderful job on this task!
See you soon.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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