I like a Maroon5!!!!!!!
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Hi [이름]. How are you? Thank you for sending your compostion. I also like Maroon5 very much! It\'s good that you like Payphone. It is also my favorite song. The next song that I like best from Maroon5 is Sunday Morning. Anyway, I will tell you more songs on Monday (= I hope you will like them too! Take care this weekend and I will call you again soon!
~t.Karen ^._.^
I like a Maroon5.because Maroon5 is good at sing and music is very very good.
>> ** You can use your pronoun [they] and [their] to avoid using the noun Maroon5 over and over agian.
>> I like Maroon5 because they are good at singing and their music is very very good.
Maroon5\'s songs are misrey,This love,Sunday morning and now on Maroon5 sing payphone.
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>> ** Be careful with your spelling: [Misery].
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Maroon5\'s songs are Misery,This love,Sunday morning and now, their latest song is Payphone.
Payphone is my favorite song.
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Correct! (=
Buy the way How do I know Maroon5?
>> Are you wondering, how I came to know about Maroon5?
I am known by my father.And I listened \'Move like jagger\'.
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>> I found about it through my father and I listened to [Moves like Jagger].
It is very good song. Because it\'s very interesting.
>> ** Consider sentence revision.
>> ** Combine your sentences together.
>> It\'s a very good song because it\'s very interesting.
And I want to come Maroon5 in Korea If they come I\'ll go concert.
>> ** Consider sentence revision.
>> I want Maroon5 to go to Korea and I will go to their concert.
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