I like a soccer.

This year the team won in the League. I'm happy like it is my own business. I like most of korean soccer player, specially I like Park Jisung and Park juyoung. My father likes them , too. Though Park Jisung has short height and flat feet, Park Jisung became a good player. I think it is because that he practice really hard for chasing his dream. My father said to me " Do your best like Park Jisung “ I think Park Jisung have strong power and eye for all aspects in th game. So I try to move seeing all games, not only seeing ball. Park juyoung is striker who goes into Franch league. I think he is one of the best striker,and he can decide good positioning. I am proud of his great skill and spirit.

This year the team won in the League. >> This year my team won the League. I'm happy like it is my own business. >> I'm happy, like it is my own business. I like most of korean soccer player, specially I like Park Jisung and Park juyoung. >> I like most Korean soccer players specially Park Jisung and Park Juyoung. My father likes them , too. >> CorrectThough Park Jisung has short height and flat feet, Park Jisung became a good player.>> Though Park Jisung is not that tall and he has a flat feet he is a good player. I think it is because that he practice really hard for chasing his dream. >> I think it's because he practices really hard for his dream. My father said to me " Do your best like Park Jisung “ >> CorrectI think Park Jisung have strong power and eye for all aspects in th game. >> I think Park Jisung has the strength, power and eye for all aspects in the game. So I try to move seeing all games, not only seeing ball. >> So I try to watch everything in the game not only the ball. Park juyoung is striker who goes into Franch league. >> Park Juyoung is a striker who went into French league. I think he is one of the best striker,and he can decide good positioning. >> I think he is one of the best striker and he can position himself well. I am proud of his great skill and spirit. >> Correct.