I like all kinds of sports.

2019-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

학생이 쓴 원문

Sport is good to our body and mind. We have learned it form the time when we enter the school. In these days I am enjoying the walking in the garden belonging to public library. My celluar phone record my step in the phone. It gives me a bit of money that can change for the beverage. It is getting hotter in these days. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Sport is good to our body and mind.

>> Sports is good for our body and mind.


 We have learned it form the time when we enter the school.

>> We have learned it form the time when we entered school.


 In these days I am enjoying the walking in the garden belonging to public library.

>> I enjoy walking in the public library\'s garden these days.


 My celluar phone record my step in the phone. It gives me a bit of money that can change for the beverage.

>> I record my walking using my phone and it gives me a bit of money that can be rewarded by a cold beverage.


 It is getting hotter in these days.

>> It\'s been getting hotter these days.


 Thanks for reading.


 Bye.

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