I like beach!
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: When was the last time you went to the beach? What activities can people do on the beach?
My last time I went to the beach is about 2017.
Peoples can swim at the beach. They can do freestyle, breaststroke, backstroke, butterfly swimming!
And they can lean on a tube and float away. I tried it, and it was really fun.
My family called it \'Dong Dong\'.
Another is life vest swim! It\'s just floating around in a life jacket. It can be scary for a first-time challenger, but as you practice more, you get to do well and have fun.
I tried these before, and it was very funny but scary.
Beginners can of course be scary. But if you take courage and try it, you can end up being a master!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
Happy Friday (^_^)
I won\'t be seeing you later because you\'ve postponed our class But I hope you\'ll have a good weekend.
Thank you for answering your homework. I will see you then on Monday next week.
Practice English whenever you can.^^
__Teacher Mayleen :)
Theme: When was the last time you went to the beach? What activities can people do on the beach?
>>> Question/Topic: When was the last time you went to the beach? What activities can people do on the beach?
My last time I went to the beach is about 2017.
>>> The last time I went to the beach was in 2017.
Peoples can swim at the beach. They can do freestyle, breaststroke, backstroke, butterfly swimming!
>>> CORRECT
And they can lean on a tube and float away.
>>> Also, they can use tubes/floaters while playing in the water.
I tried it, and it was really fun.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I\'ve tried and it\'s really fun.
My family called it \'Dong Dong\'.
>>> CORRECT
Another is life vest swim! It\'s just floating around in a life jacket. It can be scary for a first-time challenger, but as you practice more, you get to do well and have fun.
>>> CORRECT
I tried these before, and it was very funny but scary.
>>> I tried these before, and it was scary but fun at the same time.
Beginners can of course be scary. But if you take courage and try it, you can end up being a master!>>> It\'s natural for beginners to feel scared, but if you muster up the courage to try then you will surely enjoy in the end.
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