I like \"Beauty and the Beast\" because of a moral lesson

2021-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Disney Princess series has a lovely important moral lesson each other. Also, \"Beauty and the Beast\" has a moral lesson too. That\'s a \"Don\'t judge by appearance\". Beast was a handsome prince, but he was selfish, so even if a fairy disguised as a grandmother came, he showed selfish behavior and became a beast. Beast don\'t want to show to people, so he decided to live there for the ret of his life in a palace himself, but beauty Bell is appeared to him, and he fell in love with her. Of course, she loved him, who was warm-hearted unlike his appearance, and lived happily ever after the curse was lifted. This story is wonderful isn\'t it? I love this story, and I love this moral lesson. Also I love this characters too.

강사 첨삭

Hello Princess Maria!

I couldn\'t agree more that love is indeed the most powerful force on earth seen on the story of Beauty and the Beast.

The moral teaches us that love conquers all- not face, not attitude, not anything can beat love.

I will see you on Monday. Thank you very much for composing this very good piece of writing!

See you soon!

-T. Donna =)

Disney Princess series has a lovely important moral lesson each other. Also, \"Beauty and the Beast\" has a moral lesson too. 
>> Disney Princess series has a lovely important moral lessons from each story. Also, \"Beauty and the Beast\" has a moral lesson. 

That\'s a \"Don\'t judge by appearance\". Beast was a handsome prince, but he was selfish, so even if a fairy disguised as a grandmother came, he showed selfish behavior and became a beast. 
>> Correct! 
Or: That\'s \"Don\'t judge by the appearance\". Beast was a handsome prince, but he was selfish. So even if a fairy disguised as a grandmother, he showed selfish behavior and became a beast. 

Beast don\'t want to show to people, so he decided to live there for the ret of his life in a palace himself, but beauty Bell is appeared to him, and he fell in love with her. 
>> Beast doesn\'t want to be seen by people, so he decided to live there for the rest of his life in a palace by himself. But, beautiful Bell appeared to him, and he fell in love with her. 

Of course, she loved him, who was warm-hearted unlike his appearance, and lived happily ever after the curse was lifted. 
>> Of course, she loved him, who was warm-hearted unlike his appearance, and lived happily ever after. The curse was lifted. 

This story is wonderful isn\'t it?
I love this story, and I love this moral lesson. Also I love this characters too.
>> Correct!
Or: ...these characters too.

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