I like cat more than dog
학생이 쓴 원문
I like cats more than dog, because the cat\'s fur is very soft and they\'re so cute. The cats who live in the garden front of my apartment, has a twist tail, but I think they are so kind, if I go to a road, they let\'s get out of the way out. It\'s so kind isn\'t it? I think that\'s when I started to like cats. Cat\'s has a very cute ears, and they have foot like soft jelly. Actually, the dogs are very noisy then cats, but cats are dangerous then dogs. If the cats are angry, they scratch there master. A lot of people hart because of them, but I\'m okay then the noisy voice. If dogs are shouting, My neighboors feeling like unpleasant as well as I do.
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
Now I know why you love cats better. I think cats are very mysterious and very subtle. However, I prefer dogs as they are more expressive and we had dogs for so many years and never had cats.
Perhaps someday you can own a cat and be its parent because you are very responsible anyway.
For now, study hard and take care of yourself first.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: dogs
The cats who live in the garden front of my apartment, has a twist tail, but I think they are so kind, if I go to a road, they let\'s get out of the way out. It\'s so kind isn\'t it?
>> The cats who live in the garden in front of my apartment has a twisted tail, but I think they are so kind. If I go to the road, they get out and get in the way. It\'s so kind isn\'t it?
I think that\'s when I started to like cats. Cat\'s has a very cute ears, and they have foot like soft jelly.
>> I think that\'s when I started to like cats. Cats have very cute ears and they have feet like soft jelly.
Actually, the dogs are very noisy then cats, but cats are dangerous then dogs. If the cats are angry, they scratch there master.
>> Actually, the dogs are noisier than cats, but cats are dangerous then dogs. If the cats are angry, they scratch their master.
A lot of people hart because of them, but I\'m okay then the noisy voice. If dogs are shouting, My neighboors feeling like unpleasant as well as I do.
>> A lot of people are hurt because of them, but I\'m okay with their noisy sound. If dogs are barking, my neighbors are feeling unpleasant as well as I do.
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