I like comedy and animation

2010-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Some people are doing some excercises in their free time, but I don't have any special habit.I've been enjoying watching comedy and animation. Because,whenever I watch comedy and animation, It's so fun and I feel happy. Especailly,I like animation very much, because this is so simple rather than serious.So I can discard stress.Comedy is also good to me. Thus I like comedy and animation.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I like comedy too, haha of course I can’t disregard action movies. The stunts are so cool, I can’t help but to be amazed by their moves. This is a good composition  !! Here are the corrections See you tomorrow, -- Connie --   Some people are doing some excercises in their free time, but I don't have any special habit. >> Some spend their free time doing some exercises, but for me I don’t have any special habits. I've been enjoying watching comedy and animation. >> Correct  Because,whenever I watch comedy and animation, It's so fun and I feel happy. >> Every time I watch a comedy or animation, it so fun and I feel happy. Especailly,I like animation very much, because this is so simple rather than serious. >> I like animation the most, because of its simplicity and it’s not serious. So I can discard stress.Comedy is also good to me. >> SO I can relieve stress, comedy is also good for me. Thus I like comedy and animation. >> Correct >> Just put comma after “Thus” (Thus, I like comedy and animation)

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