I like comedy and animation
학생이 쓴 원문
Some people are doing some excercises in their free time, but I don't have any special habit.I've been enjoying watching comedy and animation. Because,whenever I watch comedy and animation, It's so fun and I feel happy. Especailly,I like animation very much, because this is so simple rather than serious.So I can discard stress.Comedy is also good to me. Thus I like comedy and animation.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I like comedy too, haha of course I can’t disregard action movies.
The stunts are so cool, I can’t help but to be amazed by their moves.
This is a good composition !!
Here are the corrections
See you tomorrow,
-- Connie --
Some people are doing some excercises in their free time, but I don't have any special habit.
>> Some spend their free time doing some exercises, but for me I don’t have any special habits.
I've been enjoying watching comedy and animation.
>> Correct
Because,whenever I watch comedy and animation, It's so fun and I feel happy.
>> Every time I watch a comedy or animation, it so fun and I feel happy.
Especailly,I like animation very much, because this is so simple rather than serious.
>> I like animation the most, because of its simplicity and it’s not serious.
So I can discard stress.Comedy is also good to me.
>> SO I can relieve stress, comedy is also good for me.
Thus I like comedy and animation.
>> Correct
>> Just put comma after “Thus” (Thus, I like comedy and animation)
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