I like eat out!
학생이 쓴 원문
I like your homework.
at first, very nice to met you. i'm happy to study with you. :)
I prefer eat out side. i love flour food - pizza, pasta, bread..
also I like street food. do you know ho-tteok.
it has honey in side thet.yammy. my favorite snack.
my boyfrient also like eat out like me. but i know, it's not good health for us. so when i will get merry, i will try cook at home.
please wish for i become good cooker. ;)
see you tomorrow
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. I am so delighted to have you as my student. I enjoyed talking to you today and I am looking forward to our class tomorrow.Oh, I guess my question for you today made me hungry. I love ojjinggo bukum... I don\'t know if I spelled that right. But I love it. It\'s expensive though...I know you will be a good cook and I hope someday when I visit Korea, you\'ll cook good food for me. Hahaha..Thank you for doing your homework. I enjoyed reading it.Here are some corrections for you:I like your homework.>>Correctat first, very nice to met you. i\'m happy to study with you. :)>>First, it\'s very nice to meet you. I\'m happy to study with you. :)I prefer eat out side.>>I prefer to eat outside.i love flour food - pizza, pasta, bread..>>I love food made out of flour- pizza, pasta and bread..also I like street food. do you know ho-tteok.>> I also like street food. Do you know ho-tteok?it has honey in side thet.>>It has honey inside that.yammy.>>Yummy!my favorite snack.>>It\'s my favorite snack.my boyfrient also like eat out like me.>>My boyfriend also likes to eat out like me.but i know, it\'s not good health for us.>>But I know if it\'s healthy for us.so when i will get merry, i will try cook at home.>>So when I get married, I will try cook at home.please wish for i become good cooker. ;)>>Please wish that I will become a good cook. ;)see you tomorrow>>See you tomorrow
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