I like guitar~~~

2021-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Hello! I\'m [이름] I like playing guitar, I love my guitar. I am practicing hard guitar for playing The \'punkdified\'&\'Fight!\' Two songs are very hard finger style guitar music. But I started practicing to 10/25. I practiced 13days. I will play thats song to use guitar!!! I can do it!!

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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

I like playing guitar, I love my guitar.

>>>I like playing the guitar, I love my guitar.

I am practicing hard guitar for playing The \'punkdified\'&\'Fight!\'

>>I am practicing \'punkdified\' and \'Fight!\'

Two songs are very hard finger style guitar music.

>>>Those two songs are very hard especially if I use the finger style on my guitar.

But I started practicing to 10/25.

>> I started practicing last 10/25.

OR
>>>> I started practicing last October 25.

I practiced 13days.

>>>I practiced for 13 days.

I will play thats song to use guitar!!!

>>>I will play those songs using my guitar!!!

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