I like having things in the same place.

2020-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I heard that I\'m a tidy person. I like having things in the same place. I organize things so that I can remember where they are. But I don\'t make a fuss. I am sometimes dirty. I often forget stuffs where I put. So I try to put the stuffs on the place where I have chosen.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your compositions. I can see a lot of improvement in your sentences! Keep up the good work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

I heard that I\'m a tidy person.
>>CORRECT!
I like having things in the same place.
>>CORRECT!
I organize things so that I can remember where they are.
>>CORRECT!
But I don\'t make a fuss.
>>CORRECT!
I am sometimes dirty.
>>I am sometimes messy with my things. 
I often forget stuffs where I put.
>>I often forget where I put stuff. 
So I try to put the stuffs on the place where I have chosen.
>>So I try to put the stuff in places I have chosen. 

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