I like him!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, everyone! I\'m [이름]. today, I will introduce the artist I respect.
Who?
It is eric clapton!!!
He was born in England. He had a special tallent.
He has been a Good guitar player when He was younger.
He is The best guitarist!! I think.... He is one of the best artist in the world. He lost a special son... but He overcame that!
that is a reason why I respect him......
Now, You now who I respect, why I respect him.
Thank you for reading!~~~
bye bye~~~
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
He had a special tallent
>>He has a special talent.
He has been a Good guitar player when He was younger.
>>He has been a good guitar player since he was young.
I think.... He is one of the best artist in the world. He lost a special son... but He overcame that!
>>I think, he is one of the best artists in the world. He lost a special son, but He overcame that!
that is a reason why I respect him.
>>That is the reason why I respect him.
Now, You now who I respect, why I respect him.
>>Now, You know who I respect, and why I respect him.
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