I like holidays not considering it is active or relaxing.

2019-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I like holidays like everyone does. In holidays I do anything I like. My birthday is second january and My younger brother\'s birthday is first fubrary that is also earily than others. I see the new year\'s party on the internet happening in New York. I don\'t see it in my eyes but I imagine it and feel so happy. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

I like holidays like everyone does.

>> CORRECT

In holidays I do anything I like.

>> On holidays, I do anything I like.

My birthday is second january and My younger brother\'s birthday is first fubrary that is also earily than others.

>> My birthday is on the 2nd of January and my younger brother\'s birthday is on the 1st of January.

I see the new year\'s party on the internet happening in New York.

>> I saw the happenings at new year\'s party in New York through the internet.

I don\'t see it in my eyes but I imagine it and feel so happy.

>> CORRECT

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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