I like Jazz music.
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I like Jazz music.
I often listen this kind of music, because this music is quite calm.
So, when I need to be calm, or When I feel comfortable and want to sleep, I listen to Jazz music.
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Hi Kara!
I often listen this kind of music, because this music is quite calm.
So, when I need to be calm, or When I feel comfortable and want to sleep, I listen to Jazz music.
The music that I like depends on my emotions.
I like pop songs if I feel happy.
On the other side, I like acoustic songs for peace and quiet time.
Andrea
I like Jazz music.
>> Correct
I often listen this kind of music, because this music is quite calm.
>> I often listen to this kind of music because it is quite calm.
So, when I need to be calm, or When I feel comfortable and want to sleep, I listen to Jazz music.
>> So, when I need to calm down or feel comfortable and want to sleep, I listen to Jazz music.
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