I like jessica^^!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I was ready tell you to many sentences, but I can't tell you.
So I decided to more harder study.
Today was a good day.
I met a friend after a long time.
She is getting merried in November.
Did you get married? => I wanted know.
But I heard and Know. You didn't get married^^
I am planning to get married next year.
May be April or May. It's spring in Korea.
Usually Korea woman likes getting married in spring or autumn.
Because It's cool. I think so^^~
I use the internet and looked up to Baguio in the philippines.
I saw a beautiful f[이름]cy clouds of santotomas mountian.
I want to see and go there~
Have you been there?
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mi [이름]…I am so happy to hear that you like having your class with me. Well, you don’t have to worry because I will teach you English in the most interesting way.
Oh, no I am not married yet. My plan is to get married at the age of 30. As of now, I don’t think about getting married.Hahahaha! Well, I’m happy with my single life.
Yes, I have been to Sto. Tomas and yes, it has a beautiful sceneries.
Oh, I really hope that you will visit Philippines someday.
See you!
Contents I was ready tell you to many sentences, but I can't tell you.
So I decided to more harder study.
>>>I like Jessica so I decided to study harder.
Today was a good day.
>>>correct sentence
I met a friend after a long time.
>>>I met a friend after a long time
She is getting merried in November.
>>>She will get married on November.
Did you get married? => I wanted know.
>>>correct sentence
But I heard and Know. You didn't get married^^
>>>But I heard and I knew that you are not married.
I am planning to get married next year.
>>>correct sentence
May be April or May. It's spring in Korea.
>>>Maybe on April or May, we will have a spring season.
Usually Korea woman likes getting married in spring or autumn.
>>>Usually Korean woman likes getting married in spring or autumn.
Because It's cool. I think so^^~
>>>Because it’s cool, I think so.
I use the internet and looked up to Baguio in the philippines.
>>>I surf the internet and searched for Baguio in the Philippines.
I saw a beautiful f[이름]cy clouds of santotomas mountian.
>>>I saw a beautiful foggy clouds of Sto. Tomas mountain.
I want to see and go there~
>>>correct sentence
Have you been there?
>>>correct sentence
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