I like jessica^^!!

2010-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

I was ready tell you to many sentences, but I can't tell you. So I decided to more harder study. Today was a good day. I met a friend after a long time. She is getting merried in November. Did you get married? => I wanted know. But I heard and Know. You didn't get married^^ I am planning to get married next year. May be April or May. It's spring in Korea. Usually Korea woman likes getting married in spring or autumn. Because It's cool. I think so^^~ I use the internet and looked up to Baguio in the philippines. I saw a beautiful f[이름]cy clouds of santotomas mountian. I want to see and go there~ Have you been there?

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]…I am so happy to hear that you like having your class with me. Well, you don’t have to worry because I will teach you English in the most interesting way. Oh, no I am not married yet. My plan is to get married at the age of 30. As of now, I don’t think about getting married.Hahahaha! Well, I’m happy with my single life. Yes, I have been to Sto. Tomas and yes, it has a beautiful sceneries. Oh, I really hope that you will visit Philippines someday. See you!   Contents  I was ready tell you to many sentences, but I can't tell you. So I decided to more harder study. >>>I like Jessica so I decided to study harder. Today was a good day. >>>correct sentence I met a friend after a long time. >>>I met a friend after a long time She is getting merried in November. >>>She will get  married on November. Did you get married? => I wanted know. >>>correct sentence But I heard and Know. You didn't get married^^ >>>But I heard and I knew that you are not married. I am planning to get married next year. >>>correct sentence May be April or May. It's spring in Korea. >>>Maybe on April or May, we will have a spring season. Usually Korea woman likes getting married in spring or autumn. >>>Usually Korean woman likes getting married in spring or autumn. Because It's cool. I think so^^~ >>>Because it’s cool, I think so. I use the internet and looked up to Baguio in the philippines. >>>I surf the internet and searched for Baguio in the Philippines. I saw a beautiful f[이름]cy clouds of santotomas mountian. >>>I saw a beautiful foggy clouds of Sto. Tomas mountain. I want to see and go there~ >>>correct sentence Have you been there? >>>correct sentence   

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