I like learning new thing like new technology including computer.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am resting at my neighborhoods PC room.
There are many people.
I am enjoying the rest of Sunday.
Today I didn\'t go to the church.
Today, the church rests because of the prevalence of viruses.
I am spending a dull time of the day.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^_^
You have interesting thoughts in which I enjoyed reading. Continue sharing them because it\'s one of the ways how you can improve your English skills.^_^
I am resting at my neighborhoods PC room.
>>>I am resting in my neighborhood\'s PC room.
Today, the church rests because of the prevalence of viruses.
>>>Today, the church was close because of the prevalence of a virus.
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