I like looking at the moon.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like looking at the moon.
When I look at the moon, I feel that my stress is reduced.
Because the moon is always shinning, so when I watch the shining moon without any thinking, I feel relaxed and calm.
Therefore, I love looking at the moon.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
When I look at the moon, I feel that my stress is reduced.
Therefore, I love looking at the moon.
Thanks for sending your homework.
The moon is indeed magical. I like staring at it too.
I feel relaxed and fascinated everytime I see a full moon.
Andrea
I like looking at the moon.
>> Correct
When I look at the moon, I feel that my stress is reduced.
>> Correct
Because the moon is always shinning, so when I watch the shining moon without any thinking, I feel relaxed and calm.
>> The moon is always shining so when I watch it without thinking of anything, I feel calm and relaxed.
Therefore, I love looking at the moon.
>> Correct
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