I like looking at the moon.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I like looking at the moon. Especially, I like to sit on the university’s playground and looke at the moon.
In Chuseok, I make a wish from the moon.
The moon always exists on the spot, so I feel comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!^^
In Chuseok, I make a wish from the moon.
The moon always exists on the spot, so I feel comfortable.
Looking at the moon is relaxing.
The moon is such mesmerizing.
When I was young, i thought the moon actually follows me.
Andrea
Yes, I like looking at the moon.
>> Correct
Especially, I like to sit on the university’s playground and looke at the moon.
>> I especially like sitting at the university\'s playground to look at the moon.
In Chuseok, I make a wish from the moon.
>> Correct
The moon always exists on the spot, so I feel comfortable.
>> The moon always exists on the same spot, so I feel comfortable.
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