I like meeting new people
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I like meeting new people.
Meeting new people makes me excited because I like meeting and knowing people.
Meeting new people gives me new energy and feelings, and that is really exciting.
Also the conversation with new people help me expand my perspective, and increase my sociability.
But sometimes, meeting new people makes me tired. Because I have to make an effort to go closer to them, and it demands a little courage.
Some of people said to me that it\'s hard to talk to you at first because you looks calm and cool.
I think that in the meantime I didn\'t have passion to get closer with other people and I only reacted for other people\'s trying.
But I love meeting new people, so I am going to try to talk to others first, and to make my expressions more sincere.
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I like meeting new people.
>> correct
Meeting new people makes me excited because I like meeting and knowing people.
>> Meeting someone new makes me excited because I enjoy interacting with others.
Meeting new people gives me new energy and feelings, and that is really exciting.
>> correct
Also the conversation with new people help me expand my perspective, and increase my sociability.
>> Also, the conversations with individuals I just met help me expand my perspective, and increase my sociability.
But sometimes, meeting new people makes me tired. Because I have to make an effort to go closer to them, and it demands a little courage.
>> But sometimes, meeting new people makes me tired because I have to make an effort to go closer to them, and it demands a little courage.
Some of people said to me that it\'s hard to talk to you at first because you looks calm and cool.
>> Some of those I met mentioned that it\'s hard to talk to me at first because I look calm and cool.
I think that in the meantime I didn\'t have passion to get closer with other people and I only reacted for other people\'s trying.
>> I think that in the meantime, I didn\'t have the passion to get closer to other people and only reacted to their attempts to get to know me.
But I love meeting new people, so I am going to try to talk to others first, and to make my expressions more sincere.
>> correct
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