I like meeting new people
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I was too shy to meet new people.
As I get older, I get used to strangers.
Meeting new people makes me getting a lot of chances for understangs to others.
I am so glad to grow up through them.
강사 첨삭
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Jean~~
Do you like meeting new people?
When I was young, I was too shy to meet new people.
As I get older, I get used to strangers.
>>> I used to be too shy to meet new people when I was young, but as I got older, I became more at ease around strangers.
Meeting new people makes me getting a lot of chances for understangs to others.
I am so glad to grow up through them.
>>> By meeting new people, I gain valuable opportunities to understand others better. I’m really thankful for how these experiences have helped me grow.
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