I like oily food.
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Thank you for an marvelous composition about food.
What a topic! I suddenly feel hungry. Hahaha.
I want to eat hamburger and French fries at McDonalds. This topic is really interesting for us.
We love talking about food. Really? It is hard for you to gain weight?
I envy you! Let us talk more about this in class. See you!
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I like oily food.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I like oily foods.
especially, I like Mc.donald burger and french fried.
>> Especially the burger and French fries at McDonalds.
>> OR: I really like the burger and French fries at McDonalds.
I like pizza too, but it is too expensive to eat oftenly.
>> I like pizza too,but it is too expensive to eat it often.
>> OR: I like pizza to, but I seldom eat it because it is too expensive.
Pizza doesn\'t contain meet except for special pizza, but It is high price relatively.
>> Pizza doesn\'t contain meet except for special pizza, but it has relatively high price.
I\'m a good eater like a raptor.
>> Correct!
I eat a lot. but It is hard to get a weight so carolyn always envy me.
>> Did you mean: I eat a lot but it is hard for me to gain weight. So, Carolyn is always envious.
anyway, I want to eat riceburger.
>> Correct!
>> Better: I want to eat rice burger.
it is cheap, nutritious and also delicious.
>> Correct!
>> Better: It is cheap, nutritious and also delicious.
Fork cutlet is one of my favorite food.
>> Pork cutlet is one of my favorite food.
Sometimes there is restaurant which sell pizza fork cutlet.
>> Sometimes there is a restaurant which sells pizza pork cutlet.
>> OR: Sometimes, there is a restaurant that serves pizza pork cutlet.
Its flavor is differ from store\'s trait. but I\'m certain It is really delicious.
>> Did you mean: Its flavor is different from the one in the main store, but I\'m certain that it is really delicious.
>> OR: Its flavor is different from the one in the main branch, but I\'m certain that it is really delicious.
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