I like sleeping alone.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I go to my relative\'s house, I would sleeping together.
But it is a bit uncomfortable for me to sleep.
And when I go to camping ground, I would sleep together with my friend.
My friend are young like me, so I can\'t feel very uncomfortable.
Older people may find it uncomfortable to sleep.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
You did very well in sharing your thoughts, [이름]. I\'m happy to read your composition everyday. Keep it up!^_^
When I go to my relative\'s house, I would sleeping together.
>>>When I go to my relative\'s house, we would sleep together.
And when I go to camping ground, I would sleep together with my friend.
>>>And when I go camping, I would sleep together with my friend.
My friend are young like me, so I can\'t feel very uncomfortable.
>>>My friends are young like me, so I feel comfortable around them.
Older people may find it uncomfortable to sleep.
>>>Older people may find it uncomfortable to sleep with someone.
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