I like spend time at home.

2023-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I like spending time at home the most, so I like to sit on a soft blanket and watch movies or dramas, and I enjoy sitting still and thinking about the many things. Also enjoy watching videos where people speak their minds and express their actions. It\'s fun to watch people.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름],

Great job on your homework! I really enjoyed reading about how you like to spend your time at home. Sitting on a soft blanket and watching movies or dramas sounds like a cozy and relaxing way to unwind. I also find it fascinating that you enjoy deep thinking and reflecting on various topics. It shows that you have a curious and thoughtful mind. It\'s wonderful that you appreciate watching videos where people express their thoughts and actions. It\'s a great way to gain insights and perspectives from others. Keep up the enthusiasm for observing people and their interactions; there\'s always something interesting to learn. Well done!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I like spending time at home the most, so I like to sit on a soft blanket and watch movies or dramas, and I enjoy sitting still and thinking about the many things.

>> I like spending time at home the most, so I enjoy sitting on a soft blanket and watching movies or dramas.

>>I also enjoy sitting still and thinking about many things.

Also enjoy watching videos where people speak their minds and express their actions.

>> Additionally, I find pleasure in watching videos where people express their thoughts and actions.
It\'s fun to watch people.

>>CORRECT

OR>> It\'s fun to observe people and their interactions.

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