I like spending money than earning money.
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I spend money one thousand won a day.
This day is a previous day of sulnal.
As days go, the weather gets cold.
One year ago, I worked outside to make my allowance money.
I like snow.
But snow is not coming.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
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I spend money one thousand won a day.
>>> I spend one thousand won a day.
This day is a previous day of sulnal.
This day is a previous day of sulnal.
>>> Today is one day passed Seollal.
As days go, the weather gets cold.
As days go, the weather gets cold.
>>> As days go by, the weather gets colder.
One year ago, I worked outside to make my allowance money.
One year ago, I worked outside to make my allowance money.
>>> CORRECT!
I like snow. But snow is not coming.
I like snow. But snow is not coming.
>>> I like snow, but it\'s not yet coming.
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