I like spring best

2023-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

학생이 쓴 원문

We have four seasons in our country. Each season has its own beauty, so there is no season that I don\'t love. But if I pick up one, I like spring better than any other season. In spring everything blooms anew. And I can start farming and gardening.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Miss. [Name]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

We have four seasons in our country. 
>> CORRECT! 
Each season has its own beauty, so there is no season that I don\'t love. 
>> CORRECT! 
But if I pick up one, I like spring better than any other season. 
>> But if I pick up one, I like spring better than any other seasons. 
In spring everything blooms anew. 
>> CORRECT! 
And I can start farming and gardening.
>> CORRECT! 

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