I like spring or fall
학생이 쓴 원문
it is little chilly. There are for season in korea. we are worry about Changed Climate. it have always changed next season.
I like fall . but it is short. when i was young. fall season was about one or two month. nowaday I feel like one or two week.
I guess that reason is Changed Climate.
How about is it Philippin ?.
It was a lot of typhoon in korea at this summer. and Typhoon went throught middle of korea several times. The past didn`t .
when I was a young. I liked summer. because I liked swimming and to go beach and to walk outside. but as I got older. I didn`t like summer.
besides nowaday I like to go fish.
If i go to fish at hot day. I can`t stand outside about one hour.
another reason is that I change why I like beach.
I liked to swim at beach when I was young. but I like to walk at beach and to go fish. so I like spring and fall season.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this.
>>> It is a little chilly.
There are for season in korea.
>>> There are four seasons in Korea.
we are worry about Changed Climate.
>>> We are worried about climate change.
it have always changed next season.
>>> The next season has always changed.
I like fall. but it is short.
I like fall. but it is short.
>>> I like fall but it is short.
when i was young. fall season was about one or two month. nowaday I feel like one or two week.
>>> When I was young, fall season was about one or two months. But nowadays, I feel like it\'s just one or two weeks.
I guess that reason is Changed Climate.
I guess that reason is Changed Climate.
>>> OR: I guess that is due to climate change.
How about is it Philippin ?.
How about is it Philippin ?.
>>> How about in the Philippines?
It was a lot of typhoon in korea at this summer. and Typhoon went throught middle of korea several times.
It was a lot of typhoon in korea at this summer. and Typhoon went throught middle of korea several times.
>>> There has been a lot of typhoons in Korea this summer and they passed through the Korean peninsula several times.
The past didn`t .
>>> It wasn\'t the case in the past.
when I was a young. I liked summer. because I liked swimming and to go beach and to walk outside.
when I was a young. I liked summer. because I liked swimming and to go beach and to walk outside.
>>> When I was a young, I liked summer because I liked swimming, going to the beach and to walk outside.
but as I got older. I didn`t like summer.
>>> But as I got older, I didn`t like summer.
besides nowaday I like to go fish.
>>> In addition, I prefer to go fishing nowadays.
If i go to fish at hot day. I can`t stand outside about one hour.
If i go to fish at hot day. I can`t stand outside about one hour.
>>> If I go fishing on a hot day, I can`t stand outside for about an hour.
another reason is that I change why I like beach.
>>> Another reason I like the beach has changed.
I liked to swim at beach when I was young. but I like to walk at beach and to go fish.
I liked to swim at beach when I was young. but I like to walk at beach and to go fish.
>>> I liked to swim at beach when I was young, but I like to walk at beach and to go fishing now that I am older.
so I like spring and fall season.
>>> correct.
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