I like sunny day when I go on a vacation.
학생이 쓴 원문
When it is windy, my body condition is not O.K.
Todays weather is not stable.
It is totally cloudy over the sky during the day.
And the wind is so strong that I can\'t ride a motorcycle or bicycle.
Anyway the flower in spring was bloomed already and it is fading away now.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks for doing your homework!
I hope you are having a great night ☺
When it is windy, my body condition is not O.K.
>> I feel like my body condition deteriorates when it\'s windy.
>> I feel like my body condition deteriorates when it\'s windy.
Todays weather is not stable.
>> Today\'s weather is unpredictable.
>> Today\'s weather is unpredictable.
It is totally cloudy over the sky during the day.
And the wind is so strong that I can\'t ride a motorcycle or bicycle.
And the wind is so strong that I can\'t ride a motorcycle or bicycle.
>> It\'s cloudy during the day and the wind is so strong that\'s why we can\'t ride our motorcycle or bicycle.
Anyway the flower in spring was bloomed already and it is fading away now.
>> Anyway, the flowers bloomed and slowly fading away now.
>> Anyway, the flowers bloomed and slowly fading away now.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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