I like sunsets.
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강사 첨삭
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I like the structure of your sentences in this composition.
They are simple and direct.
It is very easy to understand what you want to express.
Good job!
~~Teacher Sharon
I like sunsets because I also like nights.
>> Correct
Actally, I am a homebody person.
>> I\'m actually a home buddy.
So, when sun downs, I enjoy my hobbies.
>> So when the sun sets, I start enjoying my hobbies.
I like watch movies in Netflix at night.
>> I like watching movies in Netflix at night.
This is because every my family member is sleeping at night.
>> This is because every member of my family is already sleeping at night.
So, I can do anything that I want to do.
>> That\'s the time that I can do anything that I want to do.
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