I like that!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, Our students were progressing the P.E Olympic in the school!!
we had a lot kind of event!
I played the basketball, the soccer, the basebal and the table-tenis.
Our team got a Good reward.
We recieved some gifts.
We worked hard for this competition. We practiced a month ago, and we did our best to achieve good results.
It felt good to get good results in this competition.
If we hold such an event next time, I would like to receive a better reward.
Fighting!!!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
we had a lot kind of event!
I played the basketball, the soccer, the basebal and the table-tenis.
Our team got a Good reward.
We recieved some gifts.
Today, Our students were progressing the P.E Olympic in the school!!
>>Today, our students had an athletics Olympics during P.E. class at school.
we had a lot kind of event!
>> We had lots of events!
I played the basketball, the soccer, the basebal and the table-tenis.
>>I played basketball, soccer, baseball and table-tennis.
Our team got a Good reward.
>>Our team got a good reward. (small letter \"g\")
We recieved some gifts.
>>We received some gifts. (spelling of the word \"received\")
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