I like the Moana movie of Disney

2020-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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I love a movie like Moana there is some reason why I like. first thing Moana give all of those people who watched movie to getting impression. she have achieved many thing that is even hard to women. but she overcome the all of difficult without avoiding. she did make it herself. and it is like she say you can do it.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

I also love Moana!

I hope I can watch it again.

See you!

I love a movie like Moana

>>CORRECT

there is some reason why I like.

>>There are some reasons why I like this.

first thing Moana give all of those people who watched movie to getting impression.

>>First, Moana gives all of the people a good impression.

she have achieved many thing that is even hard to women.

>>She has achieved many things that is even hard for women.

but she overcome the all of difficult without avoiding.

>>But, she overcame all the difficulties without giving up.

she did make it herself. and it is like she say you can do it.

>>She did it on her own and she says \"you can do it.\"

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