I like to admire certain celebrities.

2019-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I want to be a famous man. But in some other ways, I think it is hard to be like that. I see so many movies staring a famous man and woman. It is very exciting when the celebration days are coming near. Being famous is hard to achieve. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing you homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

I want to be a famous man.
>> CORRECT

But in some other ways, I think it is hard to be like that.
>> However, I think it is hard to be like that.

I see so many movies staring a famous man and woman.
>> I see so many movies starring a famous man and a woman.

It is very exciting when the celebration days are coming near.
>> It it exciting when there are upcoming events.

Being famous is hard to achieve.
>> Becoming famous is hard to achieve.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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