I like to be aloe in free time.
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually have free time about 1-2 hours after come back home in a week day.
I like to spend my free time alone. Because in school, I meet many people including teachers, students and their parents.
So, in my free time I\'d like to be alone.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju [이름]. You did pretty well in this homework. I appreciate the time you spent doing it and thank you for sharing your thoughts and experiences about having free time. I also like spending my free time alone. It is more relaxing but there are times I like spending it around other people as well. I hope you are able to spend your free time on the weekend well and without any disruption. Have an enjoyable weekend! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I usually have free time about 1-2 hours after come back home in a week day.
>> I usually have about 1-2 hours of free time after I come home every day during the week.
I like to spend my free time alone.
>> CORRECT =)
Because in school, I meet many people including teachers, students and their parents.
>> Because in school, I meet many people including teachers, students, and their parents.
So, in my free time, I\'d like to be alone.
>> So in my free time, I would like to be alone.
I usually have free time about 1-2 hours after come back home in a week day.
>> I usually have about 1-2 hours of free time after I come home every day during the week.
I like to spend my free time alone.
>> CORRECT =)
Because in school, I meet many people including teachers, students and their parents.
>> Because in school, I meet many people including teachers, students, and their parents.
So, in my free time, I\'d like to be alone.
>> So in my free time, I would like to be alone.
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