I like to be busy
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than have an eazy schedule. i often take two or three schedule. and i get many experience to be busy. but sometimes, i have an eazy schedule. because every one need a rest to be busy.
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~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
i often take two or three schedule.
>> I often take two or three schedules.
and i get many experience to be busy.
>> And I get many experiences when I\'m busy.
But sometimes, i have an eazy schedule. because every one need a rest to be busy.
>> But sometimes, I have an easy schedule because everyone needs rest to be busy again.
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