I like to eat shaved ice.

2019-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I like to eat water melon in hot summer day. Eating something is good when we eat what is produced in proper season and region. Korean eat rice as a meal. I like to eat hot dog and hamburger. And I like to eat a egg. It is delicious when I am hungry in the night. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks again for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night☺

Talk to you later ☺

I like to eat water melon in hot summer day.
>> I like to eat watermelon on a hot summer day.

Eating something is good when we eat what is produced in proper season and region.
>> Eating something is good.

Korean eat rice as a meal.
>> Koreans eat rice every meal.

I like to eat hot dog and hamburger.
>> I like to eat hot dogs and hamburgers.

And I like to eat a egg.

>> I also like to eat eggs.

It is delicious when I am hungry in the night.
>> It\'s delicious and I eat it whenever I get hungry at night.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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