I like to go back to when I was 6 years old!
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could travel to the past, I like to go back to when I was 6 years old when I lived in America. In here there are exams now, and even if a Chuseok holiday, I am at an age where I cannot rest comfortably, so it is very difficult and often tiring. However, the 6-year-old in the US was in a very free state unlike in Korea, and it was a time when I could play whatever I wanted without any worries. The most difficult and difficult thing was the degree of jet lag. Six-year-old Koreans learn multiplication and division, and study Hangul. Come to think of it, in America, I can only remember having fun with my friends and watching movies every night in bed with my aunt, mom and brother!
P.S. The kid in the picture...not me...
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Maria!
(^___^)
You can clearly see the difference since you\'ve tried living in the US and now, you\'re a thriving student in Korea. ^_^
I think you have a very competitive society. Thus, students your age strive to be the best at school and in other areas of learning.
I know it\'s hard, but it is for your own good, so \'Hwaiting!\'
Let\'s talk again tomorrow. See you!
__T. Mayleen :)
If I could travel to the past, I like to go back to when I was 6 years old when I lived in America.
>>> If I could travel back in time, I\'d like to go back to the time I lived in America. I was 6 years old then.
In here there are exams now, and even if a Chuseok holiday, I am at an age where I cannot rest comfortably, so it is very difficult and often tiring.
>>> Here in Korea, students take a lot of exams even on holidays like \'Chuseok\'. At an early age, I already have difficulty getting enough rest and I feel tired often.
However, the 6-year-old in the US was in a very free state unlike in Korea, and it was a time when I could play whatever I wanted without any worries.
>>> However, the 6-year-old me was worry-free and had plenty of time to play in the US.
The most difficult and difficult thing was the degree of jet lag.
>>> The only disadvantage was that I\'d suffered from jetlag.
Six-year-old Koreans learn multiplication and division, and study Hangul.
>>> Six-year-old Koreans already learn multiplication and division as well as \'Hangul\'.
Come to think of it, in America, I can only remember having fun with my friends and watching movies every night in bed with my aunt, mom and brother!
>>> Come to think of it, back in America, I could only remember having fun with my friends, watching movies every night with my mom, my aunt and my brother!
P.S. The kid in the picture...not me...
P.S. The kid in the picture...not me...
>>> The kid in the picture isn\'t me. :)
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