I like to learn from young teacher.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to learn from young teacher.
In my experience, old teacher teach a subject with his way to teach.
When it comes to teaching, I think that the way of teach must be evolved.
Of course it is good when the way of old teacher's teach is good. but In most of cases, old teacher only know a traditional way to solve the problem and never admit
students' suggestion.
On the other hand, Young teacher have a passion to teach and have a chance to get the way to solve the problem in many ways. because they accept all kinds of possibility to solve the problem. and they are rational and don't force his/her student to study.
So I want to study with young teacher who have open mind.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear [이름] ^_^
Thank you for sharing your ideas again in writing.
I definitely agree with you. Me too, I didn\'t like my teachers who are really old. Hihihi!
I hope that you will be more comfortable and expressive in class.
Talk to you tomorrow. Good night!
Teacher Nina
I like to learn from young teacher.
>> I like to learn from a young teacher. In my experience, old teacher teach a subject with his way to teach.
>> In my experience, an old teacher teach a subject with his/ her way. When it comes to teaching, I think that the way of teach must be evolved.
>> Did you mean: When it comes to teaching, I think that method should be changed.Of course it is good when the way of old teacher\'s teach is good.
>> Did you mean: Of course, it is good if the teaching strategy of the older teacher is nice.
>> OR: Of course, it is better if the teaching strategy of the older techer is good.
but In most of cases, old teacher only know a traditional way to solve the problem and never admit students\' suggestion.
>> But in most cases, an older teacher only knows the traditional way to solve the problem and never accepts student\'s suggestion. On the other hand, Young teacher have a passion to teach and have a chance to get the way to solve the problem in many ways.
>> On the other hand. a young techer have the passion to teach and the change to solve the problem in different ways.
>> OR: On the other hand. a young techer have the passion to teach and the change to solve the problem in various ways.
because they accept all kinds of possibility to solve the problem.
>> Correct!
and they are rational and don\'t force his/her student to study.
>> Correct!So I want to study with young teacher who have open mind.
>> So I want to study with a young teacher who is open minded person.
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