I like to listen to a classic music like Orchestra
학생이 쓴 원문
I love to listen a classic music with my wireless headphone.
Every that time make me so peaceful. most of my worry is disappeared while I listen to that music
almost end of day when I drive to come home with listening music
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름]!
I totally agree that music is therapeutic. It can make us feel happy and relax. Enjoy the music of your life!😉
Always,
~Kelly^^
I love to listen a classic music with my wireless headphone.>> I love to listen to classical music with my wireless headphone.
Every that time make me so peaceful.
Every that time make me so peaceful.
>> I feel at peace every time I listen to music.
most of my worry is disappeared while I listen to that music
>> Most of my worries disappear while I listen to music.
almost end of day when I drive to come home with listening music
almost end of day when I drive to come home with listening music
>> Most of the time, I listen to music while driving to home.
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