I like to make new friends
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ll do my homework. I like to meet new friends. I like having many friends and playing with them. If I have a chance to make new friends, I\'ll immediately make them to my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
Thanks for sending your homework! Here are the corrections.
Cheers,
Jean~~
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I like to meet new friends.
>> correct~~
I like having many friends and playing with them.
>> or: I enjoy having many friends and playing together with them.
If I have a chance to make new friends, I\'ll immediately make them to my friends.
>> If I have a chance to make new friends, I\'ll immediately grab that opportunity.
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