I like to play sports rather than watch them
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to play sports rather than watch them.
And big games like the World Cup I love to watch at home with my family. My favorite sports are badminton and table tennis. Recently, I am also interested in golf. A lot of people around me play golf. In order to hang out with them and maintain a relationship, I am thinking that I need to learn golf too. 10 years ago I had the experience of learning golf for about 6 months. Anyway, sports seems to renew our mind and body.
Prayer: God I like sports. When I exercise, please don\'t get hurt, and let me learn passion and learn humility. And I hope there will be progress in my skills and growth in personality. I believe you will help. In the name of Jesus I pray.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Elliot. Thank you for sharing your love for sports and your experiences. Check out the simple corrections I made ^^ and ask for clarifications if you have any questions. Have a good night and I\'ll talk to you tomorrow. ~Jane ^_^
I like to play sports rather than watch them.
>> CORRECT =)
And big games like the World Cup I love to watch at home with my family.
>> And I like to watch big games like the World Cup at home with my family.
My favorite sports are badminton and table tennis.
>> CORRECT =)
Recently, I am also interested in golf.
>> Recently, I have also been interested in golf.
A lot of people around me play golf.
>> CORRECT =)
OR >> I know a lot of people who also play golf.
In order to hang out with them and maintain a relationship, I am thinking that I need to learn golf too.
>> CORRECT =)
10 years ago I had the experience of learning golf for about 6 months.
>> CORRECT =)
Anyway, sports seems to renew our mind and body.
>> CORRECT =)
Prayer:
God I like sports.
>> God, I like sports.
When I exercise, please don\'t get hurt, and let me learn passion and learn humility.
>> When I exercise, please don\'t let me get hurt, and let me learn passion and humility.
And I hope there will be progress in my skills and growth in personality.
>> And I hope there will be progress in my skills and growth in my personality.
I believe you will help.
>> CORRECT =)
In the name of Jesus I pray.
>> In the name of Jesus, I pray.
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